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Old 10-08-2009, 06:39 PM
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The year is 24 BBY, a young jedi named Notha Burtu trains with his master, not knowing what person or thing might appoach......
Notha: Master?
Master Tugh: Yes, little one?
Notha: When you look at me, what do you see?
Master: ......I see.......Courage.....wisedom.....and great promise. I am glad to train you. Why do you ask?
Notha:I don't know......I just...am.
Master: "There is always purpose, there is always a reason..."
Notha:The others have been teasing me lately, because of my connection with the force.
Master: Don't worry. It will strengthen in time.
Notha: Maybe.

To be continued

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Old 10-11-2009, 01:29 PM
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Continued......

Notha: Master! I sense something!
Master: I sense it too.
( they both activate their lightsabers,then the stranger looked up and ran while the two began working as one, pursuing their on looker. When they were close enough, Notha jumped, flinging himself at the intruder)

Stranger: Hey! What did I do to you!?!?!
Notha: Oh, hey Tobone........
(the stranger turned out to be Tobone, a young Bothan that befriended Notha when he was a youngling)
Notha: What are you doing here?
Tobone: Master Yoda and the jedi consel are looking for you and your Master.
(When hearing this, the middle-aged jedi turned around)
Master: Where are they?
Tobone: I'll take you to them.
To be continued.

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Old 10-19-2009, 06:35 AM
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Continued
(Tobone walked Notha and his old master through several passage ways, all make of hedges, to Yoda and other counsel members waiting in the room of a thousand fountains)
Yoda:Glad to see you, Master Tugh, we are. Speak with you we must.
Mace Windu: We will be sending you to Teloth, there has been reports of strange deaths, throughout the planet. We belive that this killer is an old friend of yours, Master Tugh.
Tugh: Sir........you don't mean......the Sojernors, do you?
Windu: Yes. We all thought that they were dead, by you and your friends from the Outer Rim, thousands of years ago. But there proves to be one left. Will you take the mission?
(Tugh paced nervously, even though he was over 20,000 years old, he still could put up a fight. And face his oldest enemy, that would be challenging. And how did this Sojernor stay alive for thousands of years? Perhaps like he did, intense meditation. But still.)
Tugh: I accept.
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Old 11-06-2009, 07:37 AM
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Continued

(Traveling across space to Teloth, the old ruins. In its prime, it looked similar to Naboo, the Mid-Rim planet)
Notha: Master, who is this Bantis guy? I mean, how could you know him?
Tugh: (sigh) Bantis and I were experiments for the sith empire. We were both captured and taken in like animals. The empire was experimenting with molecular changing and even worse....the Force itself. They were planning to make invincible soldiers, that would live forever. They were almost sucessful.
Notha: What stopped them?
Tugh: Me. I was a jedi, of course, but they didn't know that. Because of this experiment, my connection with the Force was amazing, I have characteristics of the original sith and the mandalorians, and a increased lifespan. I used what I had just recently gained to escape, but the sith sent Bantis, my counterpart in this experiment, after me. He and his men followed me all the way to the Outer-Rim. Then we fought, and Bantis thought he killed me. Then he disappeared into hiding, for he thought he had done his duty.
Notha: So how is it he's back?
Tugh: I don't know. Perhaps he was informed recently that I'm still alive. He's been resting for a long time. Now this beast is awakened. We have to finish him once and for all.

To be continued.

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Old 11-09-2009, 07:02 AM
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Now here's the fun part. You guys can help me with this story. All you have to do is come as yourself if you lived in the Star Wars universe.

Example: (Spartan walks up to Notha)
Spartan: Hello, Notha. I'm here to help you guys with the hyperdrive on your ship.


Get it?

(btw, Tugh = laserlasher)
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Old 11-11-2009, 07:00 AM
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(lands on Teloth)
Tough: One more thing my apprentice.
Notha: Yes?
Tugh: Bantis has Ancient Sith armor. That type of armor can repel blasters, lightsabers, and other things.
Notha: Please tell me you're kidding, Master.
Tugh: I'm not kidding.
Notha: great.
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Old 11-13-2009, 07:38 AM
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(The jedi walk through the ruins, searching to what they find. They discover passage ways, a cave, and also a small forrest. Once they reach the forrest, they dicide to rest.)

Notha: Master, I think that we should check the cave again before dusk. I felt something there, something..............void. I don't know how to describe it.
Tugh: That's certainly a sign that he was there. I know he's there.
Notha: Why didn't we go in all the way?
Tugh: Because I think we should wait. He would have the upper hand in there.
Notha: True.
Tugh: Get some sleep, young one. I'll keep watch tonight.
Notha: Yes sir.
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Old 11-16-2009, 06:48 AM
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(Next morning)

Notha: (yawn) Are we going to check the cave again?
Tugh: I've decidied that you shouldn't go in.
Notha: What! Why!
Tugh: This is a fight I can't risk you to be in. Bantis is a killer. An animal. A monster. No, this has to be my fight.
Notha: But master!
Tugh: But nothing. You will listen and obey. Remember, you're the student, and I'm the master.
Notha: Yes sir.

( Master Tugh made his way to the cave, slowly creeping by, getting deeper and deeper into the cave, until he saw Bantis. But then he saw something else)

Tugh: oh no.....................


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(continued)

(what Tugh saw was beyond words. Before him stood his greatest foe, doing a demonic chant. Bantis had been raising an army of zombies! But then suddenly stopped, and turned around in Tugh's direction. He was spotted. But Bantis didn't do anything. But then Bantis looked straight into Tugh's soul, and said to his followers, "Get him."
Instantly the room changed, the silent zombies cried out a battle cry, racing toward Tugh.
Tugh did what he could, slashing his way through the enemy, one down, two down, his heart racing, flowing in the force. Finaly, all of his foes destroyed........except Bantis.
Bantis steps to Tugh, and then grabbed his lightsaber. They both charged toward each other, and then their sabers clashed, sounding like thunder. Hours passed, both were extremly tired. Bantis them got the upper hand. He moved his saber in the right direction at the right time, chopping Tugh's lightsaber in half. Bantis grabs Tugh by the thoart, and slams him into the wall. He doesn't stop slamming, again, again, and again he does it.)

To be Continued

(Continued)

(Meanwhile, outside the cave)

Notha: I need to go in there. But Master Tugh said to wait here. I sense that he's in trouble. Should I disobey orders? I'm going in.
(Notha races in, he had seconds to take in this scene, scattered corpes, blood, bones, and then he saw Bantis smashing Tugh into the wall)

Notha: NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(It was too late, Bantis threw him once more, the final blow. Tugh's body never moved again.)

Notha: You will pay for what you did.
Bantis:Paper or plastic?
Notha:That's it. You're dead.

(To be Continued)

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Old 11-24-2009, 07:23 AM
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Continued

(Notha turns on his lightsaber, and in a fury lunges at Bantis. Notha's anger blinded him, so he just started to swing his lightsaber dangerously. Eventually their duel moved outside the cave. Bantis tried to stab Notha, but it got cought in a lock. Bantis broke the lock, and step back.)

Bantis: It's over.
Notha: (deep breath) I know Tugh wouldn't want me to kill you in anger.......
Bantis: Too bad he didn't leave any last requests for me. (he again begins his demonic chant, and living corpes dig their way out of the ground. Notha takes one down after the other, until Bantis's army os no more.
Notha: You will be a threat to no one from now on.
(Notha: Jumps at Bantis and grabs his lightsaber and plunges it into Bantis's gut. Bantis falls to the ground as Notha stabs him once again with his own lightsaber. For hours Notha sliced. By the time it was finished, one would never know what Bantis was, or even if it had been a living thing.)

(Notha stands over the remains of Bantis)

Notha: My master's nightmare is over. May the Force guide Tugh into the Light.

To be Continued
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